Wow Chavonne, what an absolutely fabulous poem! I think you might be a poet! I love your use of descriptive language like "rushes" and "crashes". Reading your poem reminded me of going to Rapahoe beach in Summer. Which beach is your favourite? I love Rapahoe beach. Keep up the great work. I will look forward to your next post, Mrs Gully
Hope all is well in your bubble and you are staying nice and warm? This is a good poem I like watching the sunset at night over the sea when its nice and pink it reminds me of my standing on the flood wall at Punakaiki with family in the summer and down the beach with them with the sand between our toes. Keep up the good work hopefully see you back at school soon:) Alana
Kia ora Chavonne, What a beautiful poem using such effective language. The format is stunning with the wave like background and the clear bold font outilned white. We have beautiful sunsets on the West Coast.
Wow Chavonne, what an absolutely fabulous poem! I think you might be a poet! I love your use of descriptive language like "rushes" and "crashes". Reading your poem reminded me of going to Rapahoe beach in Summer. Which beach is your favourite? I love Rapahoe beach. Keep up the great work. I will look forward to your next post, Mrs Gully
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This is a good poem I like watching the sunset at night over the sea when its nice and pink it reminds me of my standing on the flood wall at Punakaiki with family in the summer and down the beach with them with the sand between our toes.
Keep up the good work hopefully see you back at school soon:)
Alana
Kia ora Chavonne, What a beautiful poem using such effective language. The format is stunning with the wave like background and the clear bold font outilned white. We have beautiful sunsets on the West Coast.
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