Thursday, April 16, 2020

Quick Write

2 comments:

  1. Hi Chavonne

    Hope all is well in your bubble and you are staying nice and warm?
    This is a good poem I like watching the sunset at night over the sea when its nice and pink it reminds me of my standing on the flood wall at Punakaiki with family in the summer and down the beach with them with the sand between our toes.
    Keep up the good work hopefully see you back at school soon:)
    Alana

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  2. Kia ora Chavonne, What a beautiful poem using such effective language. The format is stunning with the wave like background and the clear bold font outilned white. We have beautiful sunsets on the West Coast.

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