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Her mouth turned upside down.
Her hands were tucked behind her back.
Her stomach felt like there was a flood inside.
Her heart felt like it was shattered into a million pieces.
Her feet were stuck together.
I found it hard trying to work out what to do for the feet.
I found easy was the finding something for the eyes.
I liked doing the writing.
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